Tuesday, 11 June 2013

Kiwi Creche

Kiwi creche moment
On the way to camp we went to the kiwi creche and sat down. Then a lady came in with a box. I wondered what was in it. Then she opened it up and and there was a baby kiwi and we got to pat it. It felt soft.

Every time you pat it it would make a loud clicking noise to show you that it was angry. It was only 6 months old and it was on its own because its parents had let it go. Then we got to feel the egg with the kiwi in it and it was heavy and big.
We were carrying it around the circle. Then she put the
kiwi back in the box.

I hope you liked it.


  1. Well written, Jessica!

    You describe your moment with the kiwi very well for the reader. It is special that you have a photo with Miss Patel. You look excited as you are about to be passed the kiwi!

  2. Awesome Jessica!
    You have written it so well.
    I like how you have described the Kiwi to.
    The photo of you is nice.
    Well done:-)

  3. Awesome Jess!
    I love how you have added the photo!
    What great writing.
    Well done:-)

  4. "What a great story Jess it was awesome how you
    described it when you said it felt soft. Keep up the good work :-)


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